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Summary:

Harry is transported back in time. Using his skills and drawing in odd allies, he sets out to change the future. Dark!Harry but Lightside!Harry

Harry/Lily/Narcissa/Bellatrix

Rated: MA - Contains explicit content for mature adults only
Universes: Harry Potter, Harry Potter > Hogwarts House > Main character at Slytherin, Harry Potter > Timeline > Before Hogwarts Pairings: Bellatrix Black, Harry Potter (M), Lily Evans, Narcissa Malfoy
Bonding: Other Bond
Declare Fic As ...: : Abandoned
Erotica: Fem/Slash, Incest, Lemon, Smut
Genres: None
Heir: None
Powerful: Cunning, resourceful and ambitious , Dominating Main Character, Godlike Powers, Independent
Relationships: Foursome, Threesome
Special Categories: Character death
Time Travel: To the Past
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Completed: No
Word count: 127688 Read: 59754
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Published: 09/15/09 Updated: 09/15/09

1. Chapter 1-2 by shezza [Reviews - 1] (2431 words)

2. Chapter 2 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2286 words)

3. Chapter 3 by shezza [Reviews - 1] (2189 words)

4. Chapter 4 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2541 words)

5. Chapter 5 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2255 words)

6. Chapter 6 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1960 words)

7. Chapter 7 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2006 words)

8. Chapter 8 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2110 words)

9. Chapter 9 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2052 words)

10. Chapter 10 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1603 words)

11. Chapter 11 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2042 words)

12. Chapter 12 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1779 words)

13. Chapter 13 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1876 words)

14. Chapter 14 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1756 words)

15. Chapter 15 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1913 words)

16. Chapter 16 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2074 words)

17. Chapter 17 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1696 words)

A/N- A few things before I go on with the story.

Harry is not strong from reading books. He has always been powerful, you can tell with the Patronus charm and stuff like that. But know he has the knowledge and theoretical measures to be able to utilise his power to the max.

Harry won’t be paired up with Lily for a while, so readers should chill. I will have awkward moments between the two.

Please stop calling me a sick bastard. Read the earlier chapters A/N to understand why I am writing this idea. I am growing tired of goody-goodies.

The Marauders will redeem themselves and become Harry’s friends. They will be trusted, but not as much as Lily. Harry will have revenge though…

Bellatrix and Narcissa will not know that Harry is from the future.

Bellatrix and Narcissa are important for the story. I could bring it back to just focusing on Harry and Lily, but then it would get boring without fresh ideas. It’s not a threesome or what not as I have heard rumours of.

Harry is strong, but he has a while to get to Tom’s level. He caught Tom by surprise at the nightclub. Also, his red eyes flash thingy is an inherited trait from Voldemort. The attack on James was meant to look like the FFX Aeon Anima’s pain attack.

Harry will reveal himself as who ought Voldemort, but I don’t know when.

I know Shezza sounds like a girls name, but I didn’t create this account, just inherited from my Male cousin so…sue me.

Do reviewers want longer chapters but less updates or short chapters with more updates? The longer chapters would be about 4000-5000 words but it would take me twice as long to write and post.

The Ministry of Magic doesn’t know about the deaths of Petunia and Vernon Dursley. Why would they, as they are content to leave the muggles to themselves? Dumbledore doesn’t know either because he had bigger problems on his hands with Harry. The Muggles think it was a serial killer.

Onto the Story then as I have already wasted 249 words on this A/N!

18. Chapter 18 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2295 words)

A/N- I need to know if people want longer chapters but less updates or shorter chapters with more updates. Also, I want to thank people for sticking by my story even after my 1-month writers block. Luckily it’s over now and I can get back to the story. Also, Bella isn’t interested in Harry…yet anyway. Narcissa was just teasing. And Professor Green managed to take out the entire classroom because he was invisible. How hard is it to stun people when they can’t see you? A question for any reviewer- Is there a bell or something in Hogwarts that lets people know when classes a finished, I can’t remember. I’m putting one in but I’d like to know if there is one to begin with.

I want to reach the big 40 so expect a 2 more updates. I want to reach 40,000 words by the 20th chapter.

19. Chapter 19 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (3014 words)

20. Chapter 20 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2638 words)

A/N- I am writing this in my ban so I won’t be answering any questions. Onto the duel where Slytherin will be thrown into turmoil and Students will pick sides.

21. Chapter 21 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1867 words)

A/N- I am writing this on my Dad's computer which has windows 95, no Microsoft word and a hell of a lot of viruses. Thankfully, this program I am using is free of said viruses. There are no spell-checks or word counts so please tell me if I spell any words wrong or i don't reach the required length of 2000 words. A few questions shall be answered before I regain my epic quest to write a new chapter.

Shouldn't Harry be able to defeat the Slytherins easily? Of course. Harry could kill every single person in that room without much trouble. However, he doesn't want to seriously hurt them or it would look bad on his part. Harry still has his morals, and while sometimes he might forget them he doesn't want to explain to Albus why there are several dead bodies in the Slytherin common room. Harry was trying to defeat them using less lethal means.

Shouldn't a Teacher come or shouldn't the wards go off? Wait and see.

Where is the Head of House? The Head of house is the Potions Mistress of that time and she ahs no say in the tribunal what so ever.

Aren't you going overborad with the events happening in one day? Maybe, but Lestrange wants Harry to know who is boss. If one person rebels then more people will. not everyone likes the Tribunal ans as you can see, the house is split in different directions. Muggleborns can not say there heritage or they are as good as dead. The Tribunal was trying to make an example. Unfortunately for them, Harry has brains and brawn and is willing to use them.

ONTO THE STORY!

22. Chapter 22 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1927 words)

A/N- Sorry for the long update. I have recently acquired a new game for my PS2 and I have been spending most of my spare time playing Final Fantasy X-2. I think it’s better than the first one in the way of the battle system but the music is…ARGH! Anyways, I thought I better get on with the story so, here it is. It might be a little while until I update again.

23. Chapter 23 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2110 words)

A/N- Hey everyone. Welcome back to a new chapter of my story. Read and Review please and enjoy… Okay, that was too damn polite for my sakes. I have felt that the story is becoming too serious so I will add in a few humour scenes soon enough. Seriously, there is only so much war and fighting one can take before going…YAWN! Though I have to get the rest of Harry’s week up.

24. Chapter 24 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2259 words)

25. Chapter 25 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (3163 words)

A/N- Harry isn’t picking on the Marauders. Notice that he stays silent until he is insulted. It’s been a while since I updated but…tough. I’ve been browsing Fanfiction more often and reading more stories. What I really hate is a guilty Harry. ‘Oh, poor me, Sirius is dead, Cedric is dead, Mum and Dad are dead, boo fucking hoo!’ Don’t get me wrong, I don’t mind them but I get sick of reading the same shit over and over. Anyway, I have released all my negative vibes onto your Karma so I am now cleansed. If anyone doesn’t understand what I’m saying, well don’t feel too bad, either do I!

26. Chapter 26 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (3131 words)

A/N- Almost 1000 reviews. After this chapter I think I’ll have 1000. Then, my plans for world domination will be complete when I charge my super plasma, electro-magnetic charged remote detonated glue stick. Whatever I’m smoking…I WANT MORE!!

27. Chapter 27 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (3097 words)

A/N- Sorry about not updating yesterday. I had plans for that night. So, I finally have 1000 reviews. YAHOO!! Now next target… 1400! Of course I’m going to need a lot of updates to make you people happy but I think I’m up to it. I’m also making my chapters longer but I don’t know whether I will keep that up. Also, hopefully I will reach 60,000 words after this chapter.

28. Chapter 28 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2383 words)

A/N- To JoeHundredaire. What do you mean my chapters have gone bad? I would like to think that they've improved in length, grammar and Character development. It may be the case for you but I don't like reading about the same character doing the same things over and over. It gets boring. Also, if I have a spelling mistake then could you please tell me instead of filing an abuse report? I mean really, I'm not bloody perfect and spell check isn't that reliable. Do you think that the Administrators will put a ban on me for an error? If it was like this…so harry went and gon james sed and lilys crid he this ryimes… then I would think they would ban me but for little errors…well, keep dreaming.

Parseltongue:

Curses Extremely

Powerful Curses (Either powerful magic or powerful emotion) or extremely loud voices

29. Chapter 29 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2408 words)

A/N- Hello everybody. Another chapter is coming up. One thing before though. I am a he, a him, a guy and a male. I have been reading some interesting e-mails from the HarryBella yahoo group and the Pinkhairgreeneyes group and seen an intense debate going on. My name doesn't need more Masculinity, I mean come on! It's just a name! Thor had a right to get pissed over being called a girl as well; even I know that Thor is a male hod with a hammer that likes shooting lightning at people.

30. Chapter 30 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2019 words)

A/N- Hey everybody. Another chapter is coming up. It's the start of school holidays so hopefully I should get up a few. I'll try to make it at least once a day; so 14 chapters would be good. I'm a little pissed that my last story lost all of it's reviews, over 1000! Now I'm going to have to work for them…again! I am making the Marauders nicer. It's hard to write so many enemies so I'm gradually turning them to the light…or dark if you want to see it that way.

31. Chapter 31 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2095 words)

A/N- I'm starting this just 10 seconds after I posted the other one. More fighting in here, but it will slow down soon and time will fly by. I've been doing one day a time with this story so that'll change.

32. Chapter 32 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (3074 words)

A/N- Again I write. To relieve worries, Dumbledore will NOT die. Please bear with me on mistakes and don't report me for a stupid spelling error. I don't have a Beta so I write this all on my own, so pity me please. Some of the spells in this chapter is from the Comprehensive list from Exar Kun, from Spells and Creatures. Ever need a muse for spells; this person is whom you need. Though I changed some of the effects a bit so some aren't permanent.

33. Chapter 33 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2952 words)

A/N- another one, damn I must be bored to start another a day after a put up three. And to Coolone007-2, I don't recall killing off Arthur Weasely. If I have, please tell me where so I can change it. In the sequel Ron and Ginny will be in the story. A lot of Lily/Harry fluff in here due to requests. I've never, ever written Romance so I hope it's okay. Also, i have reposted this chapter. For some reason it isn't uploading the paragraphs properly and it makes no sense. So i'll be using dividers from now on.

34. Chapter 34 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2526 words)

35. Chapter 35 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2201 words)

36. Chapter 36 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1993 words)

A/N- surprisingly, a number of people reviewed me and said that a Harry/Lily/Narcissa or Harry/Lily/Bellatrix/Narcissa pairing would be good. I hadn't even thought about, it seemed a bit far-fetched to me. What are your thoughts? All answers welcome, because this story is for you and I feel that you have the right to decide what goes on…to a limited degree anyway. Thanks to all my reviewers for you…enthusiastic responses, especially meenyrocks. I got some spells from Spells and Creatures by Exar Kun. This compendium is available of FFN. Just search the title.

37. Chapter 37 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1969 words)

A/N- I'll be leaving either tomorrow so this will be the last chapter for at least one week. Sorry everyone. Where I'm going has no Internet access. I am still undecided about the pairings so opinions matter. To those who had an e-mail saying I had a chapter 36 and 37, that was my bad. I was replacing chapters and I used the wrong bloody uploader. My bad.

38. Chapter 38 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1988 words)

A/N- I’m writing this on my brother’s computer. I haven’t read my review page because his modem is in South Australia and to connect would cost the same as an STD call, $3:95 plus I think its 10 cents a minute. So, here it is. I know that the last few chapters were just plain but I can’t have fight scenes every chapter. I should be able to update soon, maybe the day I write this.

39. Chapter 39 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1966 words)

A/N- I'm still on holidays so I don't know when this will be up. To the reviewer who said my battles were like in slow motion, those things happen straight away, I just describe them in detail. There is no pause so one paragraph of a spell working could just be less than a second away from another curse. The duel with Voldemort in Hogwarts took 3 minutes to happen.

40. Chapter 40 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2097 words)

A/N- Thanks for the reviews. Once again I remind everybody that Harry is not returning to his time. He is their forever. I will explain it soon enough though maybe not in this story. It is getting very large at 87,000 words. It might be in the sequel so stop saying 'He won't exist' because with the amount of bullshit that comes out of my mouth on a regular basis I am positive that I can make something up. Does anyone know if I gave Harry glasses? It's really late and I can't be stuffed looking back.

41. Chapter 41 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2222 words)

A/N- People are getting a little confused. It will be Harry with Lily and also Narcissa and Bellatrix at the same time. Does anyone think that my story is getting too long? I can stop things and start another piece if some can't be stuffed reading the 90,000 words.

42. Chapter 42 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2076 words)

A/N- Sorry for the Cliffie. Just to piss you off, here's another one! How it must suck to be you! Just to clarify things, it's the 30th of October at this point in the story. This chapter may be a little rough for Lily/Harry lovers. Fear not, it will all work out in the end.

43. Chapter 43 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2179 words)

44. Chapter 44 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2416 words)

A/N- I’m not a fan of Inuyasha, I’ve never seen an episode of the show so don’t expect a fox demon or whatever to pop up. Demons are evil; there are no half demons or what not. Bellatrix won't be in the pariing anymore, so it will be Harry/Lily/Narcissa. Some people are still complaining about the ship. My advice, don't read my story. I find it strange that people like Lucius/Draco pairings but a lot of people complain about my ship. Is it because it's not slash?

Once again I'm at my Dad's house so I'll probably miss a lot of grammer mistakes because I'm writing this with wordpad and there isn't any Spellcheck or Word Count.

45. Chapter 45 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2517 words)

A/N- So people want Bellatrix to stay? Fine, I really didn't want to remove her anyway but for the life of me I can't figure out how I'll have the three girls get with Harry AND not kill each other in the process. So Bellatrix is back in. The Power I was talking about is just power. No little abilities or whatnot. For the guy who wanted a list of spells I used, I really don't have the time but I know a very comprehensive place to get some. Go to Spells and Creatures, by Ashen Haakon. There you will find an extremely good spell list. It's easier to just search the title at the Search Engine.

46. Chapter 46 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1994 words)

A/N- Yay! Over 750 reviews! I'm trying to speed things up now because I think I spent too long on single days. The story doesn't have much longer, maybe five to ten chapters left before the sequel. Prepare for one more Demon attack with a very powerful Demon and One more encounter with Voldemort as well as general trouble with the Slytherin Hierarchy. To answer the questions why they haven't been doing much is because he figures that Narcissa and Bellatrix will be punished when they get home.

47. Chapter 47 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2026 words)

A/N- Thanks for all your reviews. As for what Lily will look like, wait and see. The 30 was meant to be 30 percent but for some reason, the percentage doesn't work very well when uploading chapters. The Chamber was abandoned as in no humans. There is still a very large basilisk around, but he is loyal to the Heir of Slytherin, not Harry.

48. Chapter 48 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2390 words)

A/N- An encounter with Voldemort with a duel next chapter. Not enough action happening for my tastes so I decided to slip in a battle or two.

49. Chapter 49 by shezza [Reviews - 1] (4428 words)

A/N- I hope you enjoy this scene. I'm writing this to show that Harry is slowly losing his advantage over Voldemort. He may have used a ritual, but he's going to need a lot more to increase his strength and skill to Voldemort's standards. It's a very long chapter, so I hope you like it.

Curses (Wizards, Witches, Mages, Warlocks, Sorcerers)

Powerful Curses (High Sorcerer's, Masters, High Masters, Avatar's, Overlords, Immortals,)

-Parseltongue-

50. Chapter 50 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2579 words)

A/N- To the reviewers who had concerns about the basilisk in the Chamber of Secrets. It's safely asleep and can't be woken by Harry. It needs the Heir of Slytherin to awaken it, as it is only loyal to the heir of Slytherin. I was thinking of maybe having Albus to perform the ritual Harry and Lily did. What do you think? I've never heard what Sirius's Mum was called or Bellatrix's Mum so I'm making the names up. I've taking one name from Suicide Solution, a fic by Mayhem El-Diablo.

51. Chapter 51 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2217 words)

A/N- I've had people saying that they can't access chapter 51. It's a problem with If you want to get into the chapter, click on the URL and type People are saying that this story has been very mild for an R rating but I don't want to push the Administrators. If I get another abuse report, I could get my account deleted. But you are right to say that this is an R rating. I'm also getting tired of not getting them together so even though it's very quick, this chapter the foursome will be complete. So this chapter will have a sex scene. I've never really written one before, though I have records of my Cousin using my account to post a very explicit story.

JUST SO PEOPLE CAN'T REPORT ME FOR NOT PUTTING ANY WARNINGS…

WARNING! THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS SEXUAL SCENES IN NATURE. IF YOU ARE UNDER 18, OR THE LEGAL AGE IN YOUR COUTRY WHERE SUCH MATERIAL IS ILLEGAL TO UNDERAGED READERS, PLEASE LEAVE AT ONCE! THOUGH THIS IS A SES SCENE, THIS IS NOT AN NC-17 CHAPTER! MANY WORSE STORIES HAVE BEEN POSTED THAN THIS!

52. Chapter 52 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2699 words)

A/N- I know last chapter was a little rushed, but wait and see why that suddenly sprung on you. I'm going to write a sort of light-hearted couple of chapters now. Enjoy!

53. Chapter 53 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (1891 words)

A/N- My account had been suspended…AGAIN! Why? Because someone didn't like the Glossary. It said that it wasn't related to Harry Potter. If it wasn't related to Harry Potter, then what the fuck was it related to? The Little Mermaid? Stupid fuck-wit Administrators.

Another note I want to mention. A reviewer actually made me realise this mistake. Lily is a Sorceress. And if she increases in power, she could become a Mistress, or a High Mistress. It's the same with Bellatrix and Narcissa.

About the George Bush thing, Faintly I can recall him being some kind of political figure back in the seventies in a small town I can't remember. My error, just ignore it.

54. Chapter 54 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2049 words)

A/N- Sorry for the long update and I hope you enjoy it. There are only a few more chapters until the sequel, Harry’s summer and seventh year.

55. Chapter 55 by shezza [Reviews - 0] (2052 words)

56. Chapter 56 by shezza [Reviews - 2] (2212 words)